Conciseness: Not Always Good

By atthecrux

A headline today read: “Time Warner Killed Jon Miller, Yahoo Board Deal”. Though it wasn’t hard to figure out the probable meaning, it looked for all the world as though it was an article about Time Warner’s involvement in a murder and in something pertaining to Yahoo!’s board. Of course, the article makes clear that Time Warner killed a deal in which Jon Miller was going to join the Yahoo! board.

Watch your phrasing.

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